it is no secret
a thousand petals open
locked inside a lovers heart
cut on the bias
a thousand threads whirl out
©neilaverse , 2011
Poem may not be used without permission of the respected party
It is no Secret
09 Thursday Aug 2012
Posted in Poems, The TCU Gallery
Rem Tanauan said:
Stunning and powerful, yet serene and gentle! You have capture such paradox of truth in this one little poem. Thanks so much!
Francina said:
Thank you for your visit and your appreciated comment on Neil’s poem.
Ciao, Francina
lscotthoughts said:
Very lovely words, Francina, thanks so much for sharing this beauty of Neil’s~xoxo
Francina said:
You’re welcome, it is my pleasure to share!
xoxo
neil said:
Thank you for putting this little verse of mine up on your beautiful blog, Francina!
Thanks also to all of you lovely people who have responded to it
Cheers!
Francina said:
You’re welcome, Neil, and thank you for giving me the right to share your poems!
Your poems really deserve a wider audience.
Ciao, Francina
ssrijana said:
Francina said:
Cynthia Ann Katon-Alfonso said:
Simply lovely and wonderfully woven poem!
Francina said:
Thank you, Cynthia, I’m sure Neil will appreciated your comment!
marina kanavaki said:
Ah, so beautiful, Francina!!!
Francina said:
That’s what I thought too, Marina, when I read Neil’s poem
Wendell A. Brown, aka. The Brown One Poet said:
Beautiful words spoken by a heart’s spirit! Love it Francina!
Francina said:
Thank you, Wendell., for your appreciation of Neil’s poem.
Have a good weekend.
Ciao, Francina
bardessdmdenton said:
So lyrically lovely … in words and thoughts.
Francina said:
thank you, Neil is a very good poet.
Ciao, Francina